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Comments of chapter undefined of He used to be a Reserve Genin

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

I like the fact that you used both logic and a hint of realism [ the uzu shit ], its better than the FF's where shit happens cause of plot and writers ignore logic cause its just a ff. hope more of that shit is here

Shem_Sama
Shem_SamaLv1Shem_Sama

Yep, sadly people in webnovel nowadays like some ***** scenes and harem stuff..

Weirdo:Agreed.. It may not be something very deep, but it still on point and good for your ff foundation.. The best part is his realism. The ugly truth you create just let your fanfic top others Naruto related fanfic way way over...
TurtleManiacc
TurtleManiaccLv10TurtleManiacc

Thanks for the chapter !

TurtleManiacc
TurtleManiaccLv10TurtleManiacc

Thanks for the chapter !

Anjali_Angel_2209
Anjali_Angel_2209Lv1Anjali_Angel_2209

I like it, its getting more and more interesting

ClarityDojo
ClarityDojoLv13ClarityDojo

missing a lot of ( The )

AnoMoLoUS
AnoMoLoUSLv4AnoMoLoUS

Thanks for the chapter.