NoodleBrain
I like the fact that you used both logic and a hint of realism [ the uzu shit ], its better than the FF's where shit happens cause of plot and writers ignore logic cause its just a ff. hope more of that shit is here
Weirdo:Agreed.. It may not be something very deep, but it still on point and good for your ff foundation.. The best part is his realism. The ugly truth you create just let your fanfic top others Naruto related fanfic way way over...