thechaos
I'm enjoying it a lot, and getting better and better. a suggestion of mine would be, but by the way it is not the case, I know that you are following the cannon to have a good written base and then follow with your own plots and among other things, for me I have no problem with following the cannon, changing a few things here and there, makes the story incredible also in my opinion. anyway, my point is that your percy is already different from the original, stronger, but smarter, wiser, better in social interaction, so if you put it in the original story it will be a little different, be it defeating monsters earlier, certain defeat it doesn’t happen, even if it doesn’t change the main storyline, small changes occur, and what makes a good story is knowing how to adapt these small changes or changes in directions (I'm saying this, because I already read a story that the author followed the original story, and the MC lost ALL the same fights and the problem was that he trained since he was a child and was stronger than the original , he did not understand that certain events can be different and not significantly change the cannon, and did not suit the changes). however it seems that you understood this very well, and my congratulations for the great chapter and history