Comments of chapter undefined of Her Young Amorous Husband

Her Young Amorous Husband

BlaccLotus

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RedSoniaLv15RedSonia

Feedback on transitions between scenes? 🤔 Maybe you could add some context, just for clarity. The previous chapter (Ch 36) was confusing at first as I didn't understand until halfway that it's a flashback. If you started with: "Fifteen years ago...", or something like that, it would help. And then when the flashback ends, you add a line: "Back to the present...".

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Li_MianLv10Li_Mian

yes, a little caption that explains that its a flashback will ease confusion

BlaccLotus:Yeah I feel weird about that part honestly, I noted it for future chapters, thank you 😌

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BlaccLotusAuthorBlaccLotus

Darren Qin. Older version of this...

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RedSoniaLv15RedSonia

Very sad two chapters... 😭😭😭 A tragedy impacts the whole family, that's true.

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Nia_ZuniCarterLv3Nia_ZuniCarter

Wuuwuuu 😭😭😭

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BedheadBookwormLv15BedheadBookworm

Heartbreaking to loose husband AND miscarriage, then to try to cope and carry on.

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Alexandra_AnLv2Alexandra_An

Dear Author, I just wonder... when we're honored to read the next chapter.

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Alexandra_AnLv2Alexandra_An

more please ;)

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Jo_JLv13Jo_J

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

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RedSoniaLv15RedSonia

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

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