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Comments of chapter undefined of VRMMORPG: World Online.

LegendaryStonksman
LegendaryStonksmanLv2LegendaryStonksman

DXD & Masterpiece together?

LoveIsHarem
LoveIsHaremAuthorLoveIsHarem

Still not see as it's only material for practicing.

jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv5jeanpierregerardo

I thought it was a new chapter, your story is going well xD, I say it because I have read worse stories that everything was missing. xD.

HornyPatrol
HornyPatrolLv4HornyPatrol

just take your time I'll wait just as long you don't drop this fanfic. [img=update]

noobageddon_
noobageddon_Lv13noobageddon_

Well if readers actually stick with this, the story is actually good. The latter chapter is good, but some might not actually reach the latter part the first few chaps.

IsekaiHentaiKakeru
IsekaiHentaiKakeruLv5IsekaiHentaiKakeru

just continue....... because I want more chappys........[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] and there are more fanfic that have also plot so that's why don't worry just continue...

EGray
EGrayLv2EGray

author are you alive?

Sidney_Junior
Sidney_JuniorLv4Sidney_Junior

the general idea of ​​the story is good but I think you advanced the romance too much, I say he met the girls in the morning and in the afternoon one was already a girlfriend and the other suitors, it is not for nothing but if the MC is not using magic charm i can't believe he conquered the 3 beauties of the school in just a few hours. another thing to be corrected is the honorary titles that the Japanese use, the author simply does not use and does not use the characters' surnames. it's like I said the idea of ​​the story is very good I just thought the story itself was very busy, I say the author could start the first chapter with the classes and a week or two after the launch of the game, in two weeks to 1 month the girls could show feelings for the protagonist, I say no one simply falls in love and enters into a relationship on the same day soon after meeting, even for love at first sight has limits, I thought Mamako's character needed a little more life , the protagonist has no 'soul' because the author simply placed the MC and then girls who enter the harem and ended up not presenting the MC's background or personality. pure criticism for good story-making. I hope for new chapters, and that the work becomes better with the advice. :)

LuminousValentine
LuminousValentineLv11LuminousValentine

I think this is pretty good and still better than most fanfics so don't dropped

Old_Man_Zen
Old_Man_ZenLv10Old_Man_Zen

Cmon author... You said that you won't drop...

Febri99
Febri99Lv5Febri99

where is the upadate?

BroBeforeHoe
BroBeforeHoeLv12BroBeforeHoe

author-san comeback please [img=update]

RoiDraco6639
RoiDraco6639Lv4RoiDraco6639

Need more chapters please !!!!!!!!!!!!

Sage_Honos
Sage_HonosLv14Sage_Honos

looking forward to your return, hope it's not too long

XYZ_Glxxksy
XYZ_GlxxksyLv14XYZ_Glxxksy

as long as you stick to you not dropping ill be putting my stones into this masterpiece so please continue

Jared_Anderson
Jared_AndersonLv15Jared_Anderson

can the creator make more very soon please?

DaoOfBeauty
DaoOfBeautyLv2DaoOfBeauty

Keep it up, just try to not rush too much the relationships. Otherwise it's pretty good. don't drop it pls

mayonan170
mayonan170Lv13mayonan170

plz dont drop this dude....

DeusVult55
DeusVult55Lv12DeusVult55

...this aged well

AVi
AViLv4AVi

Wen will you come back? I realy miss this story

CountWatermelonTM
CountWatermelonTMLv4CountWatermelonTM

I thought you weren't going to drop 😭😭