Comments of chapter undefined of Saving the overbearing CEO (BOYLOVE)

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Up here is a story about a worker trying to save his boss by transmigrating to many worlds

Love it

If the author is taking a feedback. Can I please suggest that you verify your writing please. This is a wonderful book up until now but unfortunately the lack of punctuations and the grammatical errors are keeping me from giving it five stars. It's really starting to disturb me too much. I'm sorry if you don't take well what I said but you asked for my thoughts and there, I said it. Apart from that I really like your writing style.