webnovel
avatar

Comments of chapter undefined of Swish: A KnB journey

altalt

Swish: A KnB journey

JW_Ngiam

Chapter comments6

Lv4

Thanks for the chapter! One question though, will you focus on middle school or will you just "time skip" to High School?

3yr
1
JW_Ngiam
JW_NgiamAuthorJW_Ngiam

Nah ill focus on both middle and high school. It's pretty fun to develop the character slowly

3yr
2
Domn
DomnLv13Domn

Bro half the fun is other’s reactions and there is none in this. Do not overdo it but you have to add some

1yr
AmIEvil
AmIEvilLv2AmIEvil

The grammar is not bad but I hope the Action is 3rd person POV to become more readable I guess but iys pretty good.

3yr
AnakinSky
AnakinSkyLv13AnakinSky

Thanks for the chapter

3yr
KingConner
KingConnerLv15KingConner

Thanks for the chapter!

3yr
RamenGuy
RamenGuyLv5RamenGuy

Nice

3yr
Jurrugh
JurrughLv4Jurrugh

Thanks for the chapter

3yr
Login