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Comments of chapter undefined of The First Female Alpha

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Dvanzy6
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I don't know if it's the description of the 'Cloud Mountain' or her feelings that got me, but I can see your writing's amazing. And I mean it, the way you don't forget to add the beauty of the scenery while describing Dawn's feelings. And don't get me started with her relationship with her sister. It's portrayed in the most perfect way possible. I have just two words for you, Author! Good Job ❤❤

Luna765
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Thankyou so much for your time and consideration, I will be really grateful if you could mention your suggestions, as I have just began writing. Thank you again