Comments of chapter undefined of A Sasuke with Control
A Sasuke with Control
DanteMustDie
Chapter comments38
That's a interesting chapter. Although I still can't understand why Sasuke is so fixed in Orochimaru. Yes, he has tons of knowledge but there is no guarantee he will be taught anything that important considering that while in cannon he did become stronger he didn't show anything which he couldn't have gotten his hands in Konoha or simple created himself with some research (and the Uchiha Clan should have copied tons of jutsus and have information about them stored somewhere) himself could have made and considering that MC can most likely improve his brain with his powers I really can't see any advantage in doing that (as MC is assuming he would be able to put his hands in the really useful things which is something which would take time and I very much doubt he would be able to do) as he is most likely to pick up high level information in Konoha if he do things correctly. I wonder, can Sasuke learn or replicate the Strength of a Hundred Seal somehow? Even if you exclude its healing ability which seems to be harmful just the power of storing chakra would be a big boon considering that both his amount of chakra and regeneration should only increase with the passing of time and if he can fuel a small part of it when his chakra is full to a storage, it would only help and not harm him.
Idk about this. Its like your just rushing through this too fast, the interactions are a bit plain along with sasuke. Everyone is just too easy in a word. They dont question anything, or maybe they do? But your only telling the story from sasukes pov, without the thoughts of the side characters around him. That may be why I feel that its lacking and rushed, just my opinion tho.
