Phantomfiend
It's readable, and i want to just make sure you know this is not a big issue, but sometimes you switch from present to past tense, so sometimes it's written "there is a" - "knocks" "stops" "failed" (so its present) but sometimes it changes to past, so : "failed" "stopped" it just makes it seem kiinda irregular, but overall, im really really enjoying this, and if i were in your position, i think i too would have an even harder time writing such a high quality novel when theres a language barrier. thank you for this! really!!