Phantomfiend
yo the way your writing is a bit...much. you might lose some readers if it goes on like this the way you are writing this is like we know what it is but we(i) dont and its too hard to adapt to this as nobody (that i have seen) writes like this.(i really dont know how to say the names and the way she talks is a bit weird: imo does not care imo is happy. and stuff like that if its going to be translated(unless it is not translated then it should be more easy) it should be full English not mixed like this plus its just changing a few words.)thx