Comments of chapter undefined of Redeeming The Golden Ticket To Life

Nope u are not doing any injustice

Thanks for the chapter

Okay this is just my insignificant opinion as I do not want to be too critical but at the same time I want to see this book grow. I get that the chapter before this is basically a continuation of this one, but if you're going to do this, I honestly think you should add more content or details. It felt like I was just reading over the last chapter just with very little additional content. It makes it seem kinda lazy imo and I know you aren't because a majority of your chapters have been 🔥🔥 So just ensure you add more details to make it seem like another chapter. I liked the 'hug' scene but I would appreciate a little more than that as a reader. Not that the chapter is bad or anything, just feels repetitious