Comments of chapter undefined of Born a Monster

Born a Monster

Mike_Kochis

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Swamp_Dude56Lv3Swamp_Dude56

It's easy to tell that you enjoy this, it has a very nice flow while reading it which doesn't seem forced. I don't know if this is intended but I like how it has the scattered brain of rishi feel to it.

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Mike_KochisAuthorMike_Kochis

It's easy to write for Rhishi's scattered brain; honestly, I've found it hard to get just the right amount of "still distracted" since he's improved that.

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LiamFarenLv15LiamFaren

is you crazy? some of your best work has been when he's interacting with his system. ooh, diabolical thoughts...through some undefiable cause, whether divine, monstrous or Other, his system...gains sentience!! but is just as incompetent! lol, silly thoughts on no sleep.

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