Comments of chapter undefined of Born a Monster

I like this concept

oh,I like this.

i hope you can fix this books grammar and format.

Barely any errors, very nice though somewhat summary/diary reading like, (which i like but i know some dont, reminds me if reading re:monster way back when) and very interesting concept so far, no matter how confusing some parts of the skills and what i can only assume is like a DnD save throw when he said “I mangaed to make my save against poison cloud (Rank 1)” Seems mildly influenced by chrysalis which i love, happy to see where this goes and how this dude survives

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This 1st person dialogue is rather odd and reminds me of Ÿe Õłdê Špèéçh

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The story is very interesting and I’m looking forward to reading more

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I like this a lot. it reads like an actual book rather than a web novel. in game terms that would be triple A title vs an indie game. though that gap is closing pretty quick recently

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very interesting

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not bad.

interesting enough so far.

It's so surreal reading this chapter. It feels like TierZoo wrote this.

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