Comments of chapter undefined of issei the golden saint of libra
issei the golden saint of libra
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Nafsu_geass28Lv2Nafsu_geass28
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Nafsu_geass28:thanks. can you save the nuns before being kidnapped by diodorat. i feel sorry to see them
Ciaphas_CainLv13Ciaphas_Cain
the idea is interesting and has some potential. I think there are some inconsistencies, Sonia is shown to be a smart person, not really the type to look down on someone for their lack of ability. _ grammar and spelling sometimes make reading difficult to read _ capitalization is random _ punctuation is missing I suggest to asking advices to a more experimented writer and using Grammarly, it's a program with a free option. Look forward for the next chapter.