Comments of chapter undefined of Burning Soul
Burning Soul
DosxNova
Chapter comments25
A simple start, and a simple intro. The basic of introduction aren't applied I can read. Don't have a chapter of exposition, let your caracter be described with their actions, they don't need a definition right of the bat, for exemple you could have tricked us into thinking they were average because a normal life them the brother escapes out the castle, and we then know they are heirs... This exposition isn't needed, it can be spread throuhough and information should only be told when appropriate, here isn't very much so. Any way I may come back if their is a revised version. Best of luck :D
Although My apology will sound like an excuse, I'll keep it brief. The reason I never replied was that I was never notified. The Novel is published through another service, not Webnovel thus I never got a notification, Also I knew at one point I'll be needed to change the chapters and that led to this disaster. I ask for forgiveness from all of you for never reading out to you. I hope the new versions will be up to your expectations.
