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Comments of chapter undefined of Counter Dungeon-Delving

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Counter Dungeon-Delving

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PrimeShade
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He’s learning! That’s great! Also, did you start omitting Navi’s side of the conversation? Something feels a little choppier than normal in the last two chapters.

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I don’t think I’ve been omitting anything but you might notice that sometimes Navi talks in Jake’s head which Guy can’t hear. That’s all I can think of but let me know if the choppiness persists in the following chapters.

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