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Comments of chapter undefined of The System: Civilian Shinobi

MobinHood
MobinHoodLv15MobinHood

I'm out. The Danzo mind control arc is way too rushed, his reaction to finding out its Danzo, is way to small. Up to that point the story was great. But you destroyed parts of what made it great.

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AliefLucas
AliefLucasLv6AliefLucas

Author posting so many chapter because he is afraid being roasted that MC get Kotoamatsukami-ed....hahaha

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An_Anime_Addict
An_Anime_AddictLv13An_Anime_Addict

Tell me author, did you post all these till this one so no one starts dissing you saying that the mc is under Kotoamatsukami. Also, good thing he got Tsukuyomi as its OP as hell and lets ot forget about Kotoamatsukami anyways. I wonder will the mc unlock Rinnegan too later on and further versions of it? Damn i am excited lol

_Solomon_
_Solomon_Lv4_Solomon_

eh bro you should've given him Kamui its way more useful

Pill_Guy
Pill_GuyLv2Pill_Guy

I keep confusing this one with the other ones. Just to make sure, he had no love interests before he was married off? Eh I'll just read again from the beginning.

Devilslayer
DevilslayerLv6Devilslayer

Too be honest i find the danzo part rushed and for some reason am disappointed in mc reaction or the lack of reaction.. i don’t think a non - reincarnated mc reaction should be like this after knowing that he was mind controled 🤔

MinMinOppa
MinMinOppaLv4MinMinOppa

now mc chakra should be kage level right? with all his bloodline and now mangekyo sharingan.

knight_of_hell
knight_of_hellLv13knight_of_hell

Still not enough 🤣 more chapters

DaoistZoid
DaoistZoidLv15DaoistZoid

idk about anyone else but I'm said the Ino ship sank so fast after one incident and made the wind chick the waifu and basically said forget you Shikamaru

Daoist430219
Daoist430219Lv2Daoist430219

You know it would be really hilarious if the MC is able to use his koatatsumaki to unlock the memories of other people affected by Danzos koatatsumaki.

Prothanis
ProthanisLv15Prothanis

He should be a chunin now right? That was a reward for the chunin exams mission after all

TagDaReaper
TagDaReaperLv5TagDaReaper

Thanks for the chapter. I skipped last couple of chapters. Had no interest in reading a mind controlled mc. Only readeeming thing was this last chapter where he got out of mind control.

DemiLucifer
DemiLuciferLv11DemiLucifer

Thanks for the update 💜

ssdxd
ssdxdLv14ssdxd

thank you for the updates it was nice

KoroSensei14
KoroSensei14Lv14KoroSensei14

Karin still in kuso? or at one of orochimarus bases usupervised now that him and kabuto are gone?

DarthVegito
DarthVegitoLv10DarthVegito

Still no progress on getting any better

Name2486
Name2486Lv5Name2486

thanks for the chapter.

Kami12
Kami12Lv6Kami12

Thanks

SlyImmortalDevil
SlyImmortalDevilLv11SlyImmortalDevil

He should be able to buy all the Sharingan techniques later right?

Bookmaster912
Bookmaster912Lv13Bookmaster912

Why give him MS powers of other people and not a new one.