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Comments of chapter undefined of Adventure beyond Mortality

UnhinderedWanderer
UnhinderedWandererLv13UnhinderedWanderer

Sudden changes is too sudden no indication of the change at all and need some work with sentence structure and cant even tell who is speaking half the time seems to have potential to be a good book but needs work...

Huolong
HuolongAuthorHuolong

Thanks for your feedback. I will try my best to improve thoes parts that you mentioned, so that all readers can have a better experience in reading it.

Bigdaddy_mew
Bigdaddy_mewLv1Bigdaddy_mew

This is an epic, I felt many emotions, from standing on the top over everything in one moment and feeling betrayed the next. I was very surprised the turn of events, some good and some bad and more. It was a rollar coaster. This book made me feel emotions which I didn't I could feel. I love it, it's a masterpiece and I won't have it any other way. The author's writing skill is pretty 'eh?' with a lot of mistakes and bad sentence structure, but I think he will get better in the future. This is amazing, I'll now start reading it religiously. But sadly, I can only read 1 chapter per day otherwise my brain will overload with such a masterpiece of story!!!