Comments of chapter undefined of Ancient Tears BloodLine

You need to work on the grammar. But otherwise, It's a good novel.

starting out very good. keep up the good work

Yo

This is so rough, it's like it wasn't edited at all. I don't generally complain about small grammar mistakes, but the enormity of the total adds up to nearly unreadable chapters. you need to hire an editor and re-upload all these chapters