Comments of chapter undefined of Isekai Absolute Copy and Online Shopping

Isekai Absolute Copy and Online Shopping

wintermist1994

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Berat_ShoemakerLv3Berat_Shoemaker

Hey author, people are being assholes and cannot understand when people don't speak/write English as a mother tounge there will be mistakes. I like how the story started and would be happy to help here and there with editing, if you want?

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LohQiwanLv2LohQiwan

Woah nice start! Just need to work on some grammatical mistakes but it’s not really that serious, I hope the mc isn’t some beta mc that is pussy or weak but I don’t think he will, Thanks for the chapters!

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Nambi01Lv13Nambi01

This is not awful yet but I hope you can rework the grammar, and the punctuation. It would be a waste not to do so.

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VooplesLv15Vooples

the story seems good but the grammar needs a bit of work. plz fix it.

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edboy49Lv14edboy49

Interesting intro But grammar needs work.

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