Comments of chapter undefined of Thomas Prest: A Simple Magician

Spreading the MC's arguments over several chapters ended the scene's mood and made the MC's words seem light, in addition to seeming that the author is just stalling. It would have been better to drop these chapters all at once or plan better and reduce this part to a maximum of two chapters with the third being when natasha accepts the offer. We all know she will accept it, but honestly it would be better and more realistic for her to refuse now and accept in the future after thinking about it, maybe even after asking for help and being saved by the MC from a dangerous situation.

Its taking too long for a single day

Well... Seems we'll need to wait till chapters are stocked up a bit. Absolutely nothing has happened in these chapters; so probably be better to wait a few months- hopefully well have a hundred chapter or so.

the author expands the plot

UmU

These chapters are so boring

You know a queen is someone who will stand beside the king and our mc no douth will become one of the stongest or the strongest in his universe so his queen will undoubtedly has to be one of the strongest so i hope she does not remain weak

great fic so far dxd is realistic and even Marvel so far is nicely integrating. Will be a enjoyable read so will be waiting for next update

siento esto demasiado forsoso,solo se conosieron en poco ¿ pero ella ya esta enamorada de el?

If you can continue to write the way you have written and not mess up the merger then this will probably be the best DxD story I have read till now and let me tell this is not a shortage of DxD stories good ones too . So good luck and I hope you continue writing.

Thanks for the chapter

Yeah this is a drop, this fanfic went from decent to bad, to terrible, to boring. Hope you manage to not make this a boring dumpsterfire but I doubt it considering how your Naruto fanfic went.

Genius pure genius

Ehh she is a little too trusting of him, he is technically a stranger

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Honestly the marvel but was a good addition especially if he wants to remain “human” cause there are ways to strengthen himself compared to just being dxd. Plus at the end of the day he is not going to come out human just looking human after all his power ups

Thanks for the chapter, keep up the great work 😁👍

Nice, thx

tomara que consiga fundir os dois universos.

Thx for the chapter dont drop the novel :D