Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto World's Shadow lord [COMPLETED]

ur chakra lvls wrong. I get that since this is ur bk that u can make certain shit up by creating ur own ' laws ' but it dosnt make sense for a jonin to have 6 - 8 chakra lvl and a genin to have 1 - 2. cause its too small [ yes u have the 0.1....shit too but its still to small]. a normal jonin can easily destory a platton of genin. dosnt make sense for a jonin to only have 4 - 5 lvls more than a genin

Havent finished the chsoter yet but the dialogue needs a lot of work

You should read the fandom of Naruto to gain a certain knowledge about Chakra and all....

Try and capitalize the first word in a sentence and new paragraph but decent idea idk why have to have him hurt and can only go to special jonin because if he isnt able to go higher than that because of his injury than he has no chance of surviving

can't read this the grammar is giving me headache.

Thx

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

Thanks