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Comments of chapter undefined of Brockwing Vale

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the mind is chaos just saying that if one woudl wnat to create soemthign based of the midn one needs to anchor it to something as well to the minds of the people.but yeah good written story. due to minds of anyone are easily distracted by other thoughts.

Craig_Beckham
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This feedback truly has me thinking, so thank you again. I appreciate it.

Craig_Beckham
Craig_BeckhamAuthorCraig_Beckham

I think I follow your point, and you are correct. Imagination is chaos, but what are we without imagination? Chapter 7 for me was certainly a chaotic one, but all chapters are written in a way that ties into a much larger, and more organised plot. One that I'm exploring more and more with each new chapter. Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I appreciate it.