Comments of chapter undefined of System: Game World

Sadly this has poor grammar, punctaution and readability. I liked the sound of the plot.

Nigga can you please dump some more info the next 10 chapters because imma drop this after the next one and i want the people coming after me to suffer even more

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Thanks

Thanks for the chap

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the grammar could use some help

Grammar is a bit rough, but it's alot more palatable than other works I've tried. Thanks for the work, will keep an eye on this one.

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