Jonah has honestly gone through a lot, I feel like losing his other half is really going to get to him though. I hadn't intended on getting too into this story but seriously, it's all I want to read now!
Wow. This poor boy is suffering the torments if the damned and still is living perhaps. I enjoy your descriptions thus far, and your English is very good, and I say that as my mother tongue is English. If ever you need help with your grammar or vocabulary let me know.