Aimdaqs
Nice grammar, interesting world building, easy to read style of writing. Great start! I will be looking forward to see how it progresses if the level of quality continues. Also, quick question: do you intend on making this story a privileged story that you have to use coins or fast passes to unlock? I just want to know since I don’t have a lot.
I think in 2100's the technology is not mature yet for teleportation? It needed to be fast forward the timeline. For example 3025 or something like that for you to be accurate as well as to support on the kind of technological timeline. But, the concept is good. Hope you don't be discouraged, but to strive for the better.