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Comments of chapter undefined of Elite Mages' Academy

TomRiffle101
TomRiffle101Lv10TomRiffle101

This went downhill the moment the author introduced time travel. It very rarely works well in stories, and it shouldn’t be implemented easily. Such a shame it ended like this though.

Michael_Ussery
Michael_UsseryLv15Michael_Ussery

I feel cheated. The author created a world that I entered willingly, and discovered a great place that I enjoyed spending my precious time in....but, instead of completing that world to its fullest potential, which was vast, he gave up. It doesn't matter the reason. What's the most disappointing is that he gave up on a creation that had a great chance of being something truly special. Very disappointing. If he chose to end it like this, then he should have chosen not to write it at all....

Heather_Badciong
Heather_BadciongLv14Heather_Badciong

petition to have author continue on as if this was a dream and never happened. we will find a way to become super powerful and stop the war, maybe with Lilliths help.. marry the girl of our dreams after figuring out how to extend her lifespan. become the dean and take over Dawn academy. yeah

Matthew_Sweet
Matthew_SweetLv13Matthew_Sweet

this story was well written, up till the end. The ending did feel rushed, like the author said, " I'm done!" it's really too bad, this story was incedible

Du00
Du00Lv15Du00

whelp, that was disappointing. guessing the writer got tired of writing the story ? perhaps the most important thing we learned is tha

ImmortalKitty
ImmortalKittyLv15ImmortalKitty

I wonder if it has anything to do with how he bad mouth'ed china here and there and china got to him...

Dragimlin
DragimlinLv15Dragimlin

So in the end, when all was said and done Asabanor won totally and completely after all. Well, that was a very unsatisfying conclusion to this story I must say, I really expected quite a bit more before the end and agree with the others that it felt extremely rushed.

iTadekimatsu
iTadekimatsuLv15iTadekimatsu

what kind of ending was this.... is there at least a sequel coming out or something?

Nk89
Nk89Lv15Nk89

wow, the ending really felt rushed. I thought there would be a continuation of the story with asabanor escaping and all.

XX_Osiris_XX
XX_Osiris_XXLv3XX_Osiris_XX

Well I guess something or someone made our author to give up on this story, too bad this book had so much potential.

WoogsTheDragon
WoogsTheDragonLv11WoogsTheDragon

Honestly would have enjoyed him floating away in the endless stream of time knowing that he blocked the portal to Earth and saved the day and ends with him dying or ascending. This just felt weird ending it without something sad or happy just kinda blah.

ImmortalKitty
ImmortalKittyLv15ImmortalKitty

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M4L4DD1CT10NLv15M4L4DD1CT10N

Wait. Wouldn't his Girlfriend who was part elf blood cease to exist if he makes this choice? Also, he really doesn't spend much time thinking about the pros and cons of his decision, he's just like "well, I'm exhausted, so let's just quit"

Whymetho
WhymethoLv15Whymetho

All that money spent just for this ending… gotta say Im disappointed he never even made it to his 2nd year and barely understood the world, yet based his desicion of what someone else said 🤦🏽‍♂️

AfricanJade
AfricanJadeLv13AfricanJade

this was such a bad ending, I spent 25 minutes screaming in the shower, never been so angry 😠 😡

B_Cruz
B_CruzLv4B_Cruz

This is the worst ending I've seen

moot8
moot8Lv3moot8

I’m glad finished it rather than abandoning it, but it’s A shame as now I’ll Have to image the rest of the story that could have been

Su_Muqiu
Su_MuqiuLv5Su_Muqiu

Dang this had so much potential. The starting and the premise itself was really great and it was really well executed but the last few chapters just threw everything down the drain. Like how is this even an ending. Like its not even a bad ending, its just completely horrible. Like there isn't any closure at all. What happened to Xiao lin, what about his friends? How does he master the ability of time. Like this whole time it hints at predestination and how those things had already happened but no somehow out of nowhere they break the loop, the heck? Like the story could have continued, from him losing his powers and using the holy grail to go back in time to change events to prevent asbanor's plan, let them complete the tournament, fight lilth, it would then have him go on to get stronger, and detail how he becomes the master of time and gets himself to send the admission letter. Or something along those lines. To be honest, I feel even having just ended it after he sacrifices himself in the wormhole is a better ending.

Eightsix2_
Eightsix2_Lv14Eightsix2_

lol to all those who feel disappointed with the ending, one of the top reviews literally states this happens.A word to the wise, always read reviews

ImmortalKitty
ImmortalKittyLv15ImmortalKitty

I'm so confused 😅

slaktarfisken
slaktarfiskenLv15slaktarfisken

Well, that was rushed with no real warning.