Comments of chapter undefined of Lord of Annihilation

First! Before it gets popular I have the bragging rights muwahahaha *cough*. I do hope Lucius doesn't break the 4th wall and come over here 🙄😳 Well, I should have done my studies but as Lucius said, I don't have a life (quarantine communication anxiety damn! 😂) Well first, the father of Olivia? Second, we don't know the family situation of Alex - or rather we saw them, the parents, but did not see their interaction with each other and if he had brothers/sisters and close relatives and stuff like that. Thirdly, do geniuses not get support from the government. They are the brightest minds and will become important figures of humanity so I was thinking why did every single scion not think of poaching these talents of Lucius and Olivia, and Lucius of his last life... Fourth, it's not much of a problem for me but what do I say without being offensive.... The stuff about Lucius philosophy is fitting, but the wording/sentences is awkward? Well as I said it's not much of a problem and I saw improvements and I do think you will improve it more in the future 😉 Fifth, I have some questions regarding the " 'I will get my revenge on you Lucius' by Ka'lor'ah jokingly, well not her, but her future self helping Lucius", mind explaining it? Time travel stuff is much confusing and harder to explain 😵 Sixth, at one bit during Lucius sneaking at Alex's mansion, did he go faster than lightning due to soul power? Or only seemingly like lightning? Because he would have gone faster than light (which is impossible in our scientific theories but possible with soul power and stuff) and did a warp? How did his body handle it if he did? Seventh, we did not get to see the outside universe or at least some announcements and stuff, so is the solar system of the planet Deatov (if I remember it right) close to ours? And is it in the milkyway? Eighth, why did Luther and Bill go crazy? Is it because of the circumstances and emotions, or causality, and will it be the norm in the future for villains? Can it happen to allies(this ally part is just an idle thought though haha)? - I'm fine if there's something you can't say about this. 9. Is there still religion? social revolutions (like feminism)? Is the governance democracy/parliamentary? Are animals still grown or meat is produced directly? These are worldbuilding stuff though so it's okay if you plan to explain later. 10. Sometimes without explicitly stating the continuous usage of soul power/killing intent, the characters who look at Lucius get scared or think 'I will die' or 'Death God!' or stuff like that. Asking if it's their instinct, experience, Lucius' presence influence, or implied that soul power is doing it's job and if it depends on the situation? 11. Erik seemed to have let Reyna grow pure and naive. Is it deliberate because of the circumstances? 12. Me being a busybody🧐🤓: maybe use grammarly? Don't get me wrong, the grammar is great but only for the minor mistypes and rare mispelling. Commas are often not needed or the sentence only needs rearrangement to flow better. The look of the font honestly looks veeery to me unwieldy but I appreciate the needed emphasis so I just want a more beautiful looking one~ And lastly the caps. Continually using it gets irritating for the brain and eyes (at least for me), not that it doesnt help but there are times when SCREAMING here and exclaiming! there can work, so that the capslocked parts have more impact and doesn't feel like it's shoved in. Don't get depressed over your writing though! I'd never write it nor write it a friendly way if I didn't appreciate the story and your efforts! Keep it up and only keep my words as a reference 😁👍 13. The world and power system is pretty mature and consistent, good job! I can't recall any holes for now so I'll just say if theres any, if ever 🤗

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Heyo author! I just realized another things I should have asked. Maybe I did not read it correctly though: How did Lucius get his I.D back? From Reyna? And how did Olivia get her I.D back? Did she not notice it every time she attended classes? If I remember it correctly, they did not meet during the timeframe Lucius got his I.D back. Also, it's not important in the story anymore, but wouldn't modern technology and even scent tracking devices/dog trackers (possibly) find the clothes hidden in the tree? Also, you can create your own discord for your books! Well, only if you'd like to. Devil_Paragon the author of Profane Prince and Nine Venoms Sect has one and it's pretty cool. If you do make one - and I'm not pressuring you 😅😆 - I'll be sure to join!