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Comments of chapter undefined of Earth's Greatest Magus

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Earth's Greatest Magus

Avan

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Geoff338
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i appreciate the way you have gone, as a parent who adopted older youth, feelings about bio parents are... complicated .. for the youth at best. this feels realistic to me and I Like the direction.

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Avan
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true... my older daughter is 14, about Shintqs age, we re very close but i still find it hard to understasnd her.. sigh,

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Maylene_Cullen
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I will put my faith in you Avan 🙏

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Woodzero
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I think you’ve gone a great way with the story. I agree that them growing close but apart a bit is a great way to grow there relationship together. I personally wouldn’t like it if she was like force into Lucious class and Emery had to save her or something tragic like that but that just me. Anyway 🍷 doing great

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WarStrider72
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WarStrider72
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1st

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