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Comments of chapter undefined of Earth's Greatest Magus

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Geoff338
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i appreciate the way you have gone, as a parent who adopted older youth, feelings about bio parents are... complicated .. for the youth at best. this feels realistic to me and I Like the direction.

Kehinde_Oloruntayo
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I don't like Shinta to be honest; Emery's daughter or not, she has a very nasty attitude & just from the recent chapters you'll notice she has betrayal tendencies like her aunt Annara.

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Maylene_Cullen
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I will put my faith in you Avan 🙏

ThatOneGuy72
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When he does finally find out she's his daughter he better be angry at the Ouroboros obviously I don't want him direct any of that at Shinta and I don't think he will cos it's not her fault. Also I get they probably had their reasons but they know how capable Emery is and how often he defied expectations, which is exactly why they tried to trap him at their faction in the first place. They also know how real the love between him and Silva was so they know how messed up it is to deprive him of his last living connection to her. It's something I'd expect from the Queen and Visla but I am kinda disappointed in Annara and Bob tbh. But yeah overall I just want a bit of righteous fury from Emery when the truth comes to light.

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Woodzero
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I think you’ve gone a great way with the story. I agree that them growing close but apart a bit is a great way to grow there relationship together. I personally wouldn’t like it if she was like force into Lucious class and Emery had to save her or something tragic like that but that just me. Anyway 🍷 doing great

WarStrider72
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WarStrider72
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