Comments of chapter undefined of Earth's Greatest Magus
Earth's Greatest Magus
Avan
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Not going to lie I personally think the earth portion of the story has gotten boring, it’s just become exposition then “Ohhh something special that usually wouldn’t be on a low world was found on earth and that helped him get stronger randomly” wish he would have taken the deal, and even if he has to go back to earth all he has to do is negotiate some time to deal with stuff on earth, if he has basically an unlimited lifespan a couple years is nothing and there is no way he’s going to come close to matching a whole faction anytime soon or ever without help and resources, I enjoy large parts of the story but if these factions are as strong as you’ve made them out to be, with how many extra resources he needs and with the fact that this is his last “term” of his time in the academy, and his bloodline is as valuable as you’ve made it out to be he should have the freedom to help his own world even if he takes the deal especially since it’s a faction he’s trusted with his secrets and by now should have the IQ and emotional growth to not act like the kid that was the lowest noble on some island on a low world, what’s the point of the character growth he’s been through if every major decision he reverts back to the character he was at the beginning of the story. Don’t mean this to sound harsh, I’ve enjoyed reading this story a lot and I think you’re a great writer but IMO the earth storyline has become really forced and the characters outside of his main group don’t contribute much of anything to the story, I would much rather see him come back to earth incredibly strong and be able to handle everything easily rather than some enemy like the witch get some random power up so it becomes a struggle for him, even if its “special” earth is a low world and his main conflict with the Nephilim faction won’t take place on earth. Again most of the story is great and you can totally disregard my opinion and I’ll still read it but just want to let you know how this comes off as in my opinion, but it’s your story and as long as you enjoy writing it I’ll read it
I don't understand. Saving his planet from the Nephilim is going to require a strong backer. At the moment, their best hope is for gilgamesh to become the caretaker of Earth. There are two problems with that. Gilgamesh could possibly die in the Frontline before that happens. The original headmaster could die and make this option unavailable. This is where being a part of a strong faction comes in handy. With the Harlight and Oroboros together, they should at least prevent its destruction. As for Gaia's prophecy, Kilgragah, and spirit core issue, he can either ask to be sent there after that year in the academy since it directly affects his strength (which is what the oroboros are interested in). (The Harlight let Julian stay on Earth for three years. Emery could most likely do the same.) Duke Sirye already know about his dual core and the primordial. The least he can go for is something like, "As you know your majesty, the issue with my spirit core prevents me from being a magus, however the key to resolve that is on my home planet. If I am free to travel to my home planet after the academy to finish my business there, I will accept this offer. If not, I postpone my answer until then or, if possible, sign a contract that will guarantee my joining of this faction at a later time." As for those saying this is toxic, politics has always been toxic. Also, I read one comment that said that you'll never know what they would want you to do. That goes for all factions. Emery needs to pick a faction, though.
ima tell you what he should do , Respectfully give her 3 options ÷ OPTION 1 - KILL ME AND WASTE YOUR HARDWORK ON ME AND BADICALLY KILL A RANK 8 BLOODLINE DIAMOND WHO YOU KNOW POSSIBLY COULD BECOME A MAGUS . OPTION 2 - (HE IS BLUFFING ) SEE YOUR MAJESTY I HAVE SOMETHING FROM THE WISP THAT GIVES ME ATLEAST XYZ CHANCE OF ESCAPE . IT IS NOT CERTAIN I CAN ESCAPE BUT IF I DO WELL YOULL LOSE A GOOD FRIEND AND GAIN AN ENEMY. ( NOW I REALIZE THERE ARE A LOT OF HOLES HERE BUT CMON ) OPTION 3 - GIVE ME A TIME BOUND CONTRACT WITH MY CONDITIONS . ARIGATO ( MAKE THIS SENTENCE A BIT DOWN TO EARTH NOT ARROGANT )
