Comments of chapter undefined of Earth's Greatest Magus
Earth's Greatest Magus
Avan
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UnfetteredMindLv5UnfetteredMind
tbh this is trash writing. He didnt do a single thing to prepare. how useless is this Rank 3 title If any Idiot who simply bought 3 skills and didnt do any training can pass the test.
UnfetteredMindLv5UnfetteredMind
Sorry, Avan - it's nothing personal. I have anger issues when it comes to stories that are "almost perfect". It's like eating your favourite cake but suddenly finding a hair stuck inside. A single hair makes you contemplate whether to continue eating or throwing the whole thing away. Your story is a delicious cake, but every other piece seems to have a hair in it.
Avan:why you so unhappy... i read all.your commnet u know
