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Comments of chapter undefined of Earth's Greatest Magus

NiNhie
NiNhieLv1NiNhie

i like when the story are starting to unveil the past :)

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Ethglade
EthgladeLv15Ethglade

I am not sure if I want her as a nemesis or a lover. Honestly I would rather see him somehow with Cleo or better yet a girl not of that planet. Arthur sort her out instead. Option 2 would also be interesting as it would keep more to the Merlin of old. Quite simply have him with no romance. Romance without purpose is never worth it. In fact due to a youth where he might experience trauma with women such as Gwen it would not be odd that he would choose a solitary lifestyle. Merlin provided wisdom and guidance and was ultimately a teacher and a guide. It really comes down to what you want for your character and how you invision your story. Is it more fitting for him to have a romance that remains unfulfilled the rest of his life? Does he get his happily ever after? If he has romance does he keep that part of himself separate from everyone else? Ultimately our main character will become someone at a higher stage. I could see him having some feeling build up but after Princess Gwen be far more hesitant towards developing feeling for others. While she didn't mean to harm him and time has past it is still tinged heavily in the memories of his father's death. Not to mention that he worked hard making a gift with his own two hands to impress her and years of friendship. Not to mention he keeps having betrayal after betrayal of the fairer ***. I could even see Morgana apprenticing under his previous mentor. Regardless of how you choose to portray it I look forward to what you develop. All I ask is if you choose romance please avoid harem. Choose a love interest that compliments him and his lifestyle and the character himself. Right now I think it is too early as you are still developing him. If he should have a child make them relevant to the plot. If he does have a love interest and she should die I imagine it would be very hard. Our MC belongs to a world full of immortal beings and losing your first love does not mean you can't find a second. You just love differently than the first and sometimes you cherish them even more for it. All I can say is thank you for the story and whatever you do please no harem!

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Cryogix
CryogixLv13Cryogix

Oh so emery Is special among the fey He has the particularities of the males and females

Shadow_2580
Shadow_2580Lv15Shadow_2580

damn sooo many hopes just wishing there were more chapters per day 😭

Demonshadow639
Demonshadow639Lv14Demonshadow639

Wow!!! Does that meen he will eventually be able to fully transform into a wolf... that is something that would be amazing and something i have dreamt about personally!!!! This is an amzkng story and im glad we have finially meet Morgana

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IsiahGames
IsiahGamesLv15IsiahGames

Thanks for the chapter

AURELIUS
AURELIUSLv15AURELIUS

why not both. a romance surrounded by some kind of rivalry that begins with some form of tragedy. they both like each other but some event keeps them from being together.

WiseRagnar
WiseRagnarLv15WiseRagnar

the best are both

90Bry
90BryLv1590Bry

Should change “during their doubt” to “during their bout”

cpbino
cpbinoLv14cpbino

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon