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Comments of chapter undefined of Earth's Greatest Magus

BrisingrArget
BrisingrArgetLv13BrisingrArget

Thanks

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Plot_Armor
Plot_ArmorLv4Plot_Armor

The story is not slow. Perfect pace, world building interspersed with progress on the MC side. Character building as well. This is a promising start. Rushing into the action can work if you make long flashbacks 5 chapters in but if otherwise rushed atories will get stuck in power creep and slapfacing to keep their entertainment value.

fegzzxc
fegzzxcLv12fegzzxc

drop MC don't have backbone for me the story can suck but not having backbone is like saying i can't breath

Freddie_Martinez
Freddie_MartinezLv14Freddie_Martinez

it seems that Emery,is just a supporting character here

Mr_No_One
Mr_No_OneLv4Mr_No_One

I like it, MC becoming stronger, yay😁

NiNhie
NiNhieLv1NiNhie

Wow! can’t wait for emery, chumo and thrax to experience the obstacle!! The story is already unfolding[img=coins][img=coins]

Vishal_Chaudhari_9634
Vishal_Chaudhari_9634Lv3Vishal_Chaudhari_9634

Mc is supporting character🥲🥲..

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ItMustBe
ItMustBeLv6ItMustBe

Thanks for the chapter

In_Progress
In_ProgressLv1In_Progress

Good

S_L_Aurora_Mess
S_L_Aurora_MessLv1S_L_Aurora_Mess

you are doing great! keep up the good work!

Neithir
NeithirLv15Neithir

yeah, love the pace, it's perfect

Daoist4lEZKV
Daoist4lEZKVLv10Daoist4lEZKV

ty

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demigod1
demigod1Lv14demigod1

Thanks for the chapter

Kelly143
Kelly143Lv2Kelly143

Ty!

UhmOkayy
UhmOkayyLv5UhmOkayy

Thanks for the chapter

Lucinda_Hacker
Lucinda_HackerLv4Lucinda_Hacker

Like saying palmfacing!

Mr_Shang
Mr_ShangLv13Mr_Shang

Thank you for the chapter~

TsunayoshiSawada
TsunayoshiSawadaLv2TsunayoshiSawada

Thanks!

Otterboy
OtterboyLv2Otterboy

Thank you!

MikaelDragonsoul
MikaelDragonsoulLv15MikaelDragonsoul

thanks for the chapter