Comments of chapter undefined of Earth's Greatest Magus
Earth's Greatest Magus
Avan
Chapter comments31
They literally talked the reason why the king was so furious with him and he is so dumb to not realize that the reason is because he is a half blood? I mean how dumb can you make the MC? and the father was in the house he is a noble should he not have a army? Should he not have been warned? So many people came to his house unnoticed just like that? Wow such a terrible chapter disgusted me with so many plot hole and stupid characters, I am really surprised that the autor did not correct or even excluded this chapter.
good_ness:you really have patience. I'm wondering why the comment section is disgusted when you clearly stated that they are the lowest ranking nobles. Anyway good job
How did his father not see this coming... You need to explain more if this is the way you want to do it unless your fine with plot holes or your characters looking like fools.
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Avan
This was a strong opening to the story. lack of cringe is the most important thing for me these days in the books I read. Lots of authors come off as edgy teenage boys lol , I think so far this lit is a step above. A few steps. I was about to give up finding a good novel tonight and just go to sleep , but fortunately I found this and will be up till 3am after all haha
