Comments of chapter undefined of Earth's Greatest Magus
Earth's Greatest Magus
Avan
Chapter comments31
Really hoping that from here on out story would get better, cause making every character a complete moron doesnt do it any good. I was of an opinion that mc’ family lost their standing exactly because of their relation with forest folk. Yet, exactly how/why a child born and raized in the nobility Is supposed to be guilty of his mother / forest folk business from years ago. In case Ambrosia family managed to hide their relations all the while getting straped of any standings for precisely that, whould indicate weak as it gets plot. The princess was supposed to be a bookworm at the very least, not a braindead... it speaks volumes about her character seeing how little care she showed for her practically only friend when he needed It the most. If this person is gonna be female lead, it’s gonna be a hard skip for me. Sorry, no sorry. Only 3 people with power just learned about half-blood thingy from prev chap. I find it hilarius how antagonist waited for, what, a decade before dealing with mc’ family line, ending up doing it the same day he randomly notices childs eyes as half-blood’s.
They literally talked the reason why the king was so furious with him and he is so dumb to not realize that the reason is because he is a half blood? I mean how dumb can you make the MC? and the father was in the house he is a noble should he not have a army? Should he not have been warned? So many people came to his house unnoticed just like that? Wow such a terrible chapter disgusted me with so many plot hole and stupid characters, I am really surprised that the autor did not correct or even excluded this chapter.
This was a strong opening to the story. lack of cringe is the most important thing for me these days in the books I read. Lots of authors come off as edgy teenage boys lol , I think so far this lit is a step above. A few steps. I was about to give up finding a good novel tonight and just go to sleep , but fortunately I found this and will be up till 3am after all haha
