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Comments of chapter undefined of In Naruto: Reborn with Talent

Shibito_013
Shibito_013Lv11Shibito_013

Thanks for the chapter.

Tora_ryu
Tora_ryuLv5Tora_ryu

I'll say what I always tell authors...keep doing what you're doing! If you're not having fun or are not interested in your own story then there's no point. I've enjoyed this story a great deal as I've been reading since it first came out so I'm not even remotely bothered by this arc not focusing on Rei. take a power stone and keep up the great work author!!!

Cham_Dubouzet_5006
Cham_Dubouzet_5006Lv3Cham_Dubouzet_5006

maybe they just felt that the chapters are too short so it felt lacking, though the stories quality is High the chapter size is to short, hoping for increase words or double chapters :D

Ryan_Davis_6415
Ryan_Davis_6415Lv3Ryan_Davis_6415

Their isn't much happening in the last few chapters which is making it boring. The matches are just taking too long.

Orthanos
OrthanosLv5Orthanos

Dude I been with you since Chapter 1!!! You do you my man! RESPECT!

kuokyo
kuokyoLv5kuokyo

instead of making half-page excuses, you could have written another chapter...

coldpyr0
coldpyr0Lv14coldpyr0

I think they are complaining because of the switch from exciting and new, claymore, back to something similar to the main plot. Most people seem to enjoy fanfiction but get bored if it follows the original plot, so that might be the issue for some. Personally I enjoy the fights since they aren't directly copied from the original and even include the character changes so the original characters are being affected by the changes Rei has caused and fighting differently.

frostburrn
frostburrnLv15frostburrn

thanks, this story is great and i am glad you are still writing it. I look for forward to reading this everyday

Chaosking24
Chaosking24Lv5Chaosking24

i wounder how the claymore main continent feel about their lab just being gone when they do take the time to take a look btw should'nt you tell Kaguya about isshiki being alive you know the guy from that show that dont exist(boruto) oh and akame ga kill should have two continents their is a story about a continent were the first emperor went and learnt how to make the wepons teigu akame went there to undo the curse from her sword

SladeOfWolf
SladeOfWolfLv4SladeOfWolf

Thanks

_Water_
_Water_Lv12_Water_

develope the male characters more and show rei and the villagers reactions more instead of writing 'they were amazed' or something.

William_Ruiz
William_RuizLv4William_Ruiz

Love the fights from all previous chapters but author's rant ruined the chapter.

95_novel_maniac_95
95_novel_maniac_95Lv595_novel_maniac_95

meh...I like and enjoy the fic.... that's all that matters to me thanks for the chapter 👍👍

manuel91
manuel91Lv4manuel91

Thank you for the chapter. Keep up the excellent work author. In the chapter where you described the other continents you talked about Claymore's and Akame ga Kill's but you mentioned another one but never gave more details, will you do it later? As for if the MC visits the Empire later in the story, maybe teigu users at basic levels are not as strong as experienced shinobi but one who has mastered his teigu to the max and created his own trump cards will be really dangerous, for example Esdeath who with her "Mahapadma" technique can freeze time and space as long as she has energy.

Fanfic_Researcher
Fanfic_ResearcherLv14Fanfic_Researcher

thnks for the chappy! great work as always

Veasna_TDM
Veasna_TDMLv11Veasna_TDM

I notice how the story change over time, sometimes it improve, sometimes, it rage inducing, but it still getting better than the beginning.

BurglarOfTurds
BurglarOfTurdsLv15BurglarOfTurds

my only complaint to authors is slusually when they keep starting new stories and abandoning all the old ones lol you doing great!

XSindryX
XSindryXLv10XSindryX

No me parece aburrido, me agrada que alla sentido comun o logica en naruto y que el personaje alla llegado hasta donde esta gracias a su propio esfuerzo,Las batallas son bastante buenas y las narras bien(Temari vs Karin),Me quede en este fanfic por que me agrada el protagonista,Es totalmente independiente de Naruto y sigue sus propias metas. SIGUE ASI :D.

NiceGuy
NiceGuyLv12NiceGuy

personally, I think this novel has not been boring except for when the Naruto + Sasugay + Hinata fighting scenes were present. and it was boring because I have read way too many Naruto fanfics.... but ~~~ you got my point, right? this novel is among the best fanfics on web novel.

PUERKO_Senpai
PUERKO_SenpaiLv4PUERKO_Senpai

KARIN WAIFU!!!!!!