KasiCair
It is better that he be strong(konan and Mc) xD, and with respect to Tsunade, I never liked (dan) with his personality that I want to create a world of peace, that pod is nonsense, and as you put him as a villain character, it would be good if he dies for a kunai xD and by the way that he also despises sarutobi.
Konan is the best MC ever and with her side bitch who got reincarnated with godly talents is still shit compared to our almighty MC konan he is just a cow for her to milk I love the MC can't wait till she can get her harem or harem of lesbian women maybe even tsunade falls for her 😀😄😁 can't wait how broken or overpowered our MC konan can become 😃😃😃😄😁 I'm just waiting when that side bitch with supposedly godly talents (lol a insult to the word godly)will die to kona the push she needs to be be a god😃😃😃 great character design author 👏👏👏👏
I know there are a lot more chapters but I will still comment. I don’t mind her being stronger than MC, but you basically did yourself last chapter. Konan originally was talented, intelligent and hardworking, by giving her all of MCs talents you basically made it so that she will always be stronger than him, more so if her purpose is to protect him (which makes her want to be stronger than him) And you said it yourself, to make MC stronger than her, you have to bullshit yourself to do it, because otherwise there is no way, even if you make MC do a lot of nonsense with seals, that’s nothing that konan can’t do herself, and it is you that is making her not do it just to make MC look stronger. As I said I don’t mind MC being stronger or Konan being stronger, for all we know he can beat her with tactics and strategy . However, that was hella mistake you did there.
A few things: If Konan got a watered down version of his traits, then he should get the same from her. No bullshit of his soul being larger, since his own traits should work on making up the difference The reason for not trying to make jutsu is flimsy at best and retarded at worst. He has supreme control and has been playing with chakra threads from the start but doesn't even think of doing some shape manipulation? What about seals and their usage? Normally they are used to shape chakra and since he can easily do it himself, he could technically replicate jutsus without or nearly without handsigns or create new ones the same way Why has he never tried to directly control paper, and why did they not build small houses when going around. They can literally control earth and stone, so making a simple house should be far from hard, at most taking a couple of days and maybe a week or so to get it all done and fitted with nice seals, like a seal for soft comfortable beds
if you make your own hidden village make the currency chakra, a slip of chakra paper each with more or less will allow anyone with unlocked chakra to make money unlock all of your villages chakra and make them use it to power their homes and different chakra worth different price unprocessed (when it is not changed to chakra anyone can absorb only use is for appliances ) elemental(up the price for how pure it is ) kekia genkia chakra senjutsu up the price compared to market and adjust you have to use a special device (for each tier of note) to put refill chakra in money unfilled notes only worth 1/20 of there original price your people get these refillers almost basicaly free only works
um if Konan gets his chakra control and nature affinity why can't he get her bloodline powers also can he make a seal tracker it absorbs a small amount of senjutsu bearly sensible it doesn't seem like a huge stretch to be able to track that and get GPS for all ninja and villages hidden around (because all ninja use seals whether they are storage or explosions / and all villages/ruins/secret bases use seals ) maybe go around using seals+paper to make slave seals and takeover the hidden villages then make it law all people get chakra unlocked and makes a bunch of seals for things like farm works cars trains a stargate thing mine droids Chakra to devise to sense where deposits of metal than extract them by moving metal through moving earth kinda like squishing plastic to force the gogurt up. Weather machine they can already manipulate the weather with elemental control replicate with seals. use seals as chakra storage using stasis since that keeps the elemental coating on shurikens, it in theory lets people store chakra. I really want you to make your own village and make it better than the 5 elemental yin yang,senjutsu village take all the orphans of the elemental nations trains them or gives them a school for either ninja or civilian our version of the school uses seals to teach uses Orochimaru research to get more knowledge and his cursed seals (by the way would that allow for bloodline sharing since it causes others to have jugos bloodline maybe some way to upgrade talent since he did do genetic manipulation with injecting Senju bloodline in Danzo )
the seals to mass-produce products use wood bloodline to mass-produce food cloning mass-produce meat there you have become rich do it all 500 miles underground and use space seals to store and transport no one can steal the method you used. method to mass-produce seals use chakra storing seal and connect to printer easy enough combine with other things such as seals to another object like a fridge use space seal and senjutsu to power and the senjutsu to conceal seals, or seals to absorb solar light and transform to chakra, or just genetic modify trees to give chakra to a pre-put seal. I just had this idea use guns for your village only focus shinobi only train their bodies to use guns to fight and use objects to fight like boruto pre-made Jutsu's to fight shinobi need to strain stamina and body control and the talented can focus on making new Jutsu or exclusive really want you to make your own village