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Comments of chapter undefined of Fairy Tail and the Rise of the Fairy's God

VoiD_dEmOn
VoiD_dEmOnLv11VoiD_dEmOn

bro no need for romance or anything now. And could plzzz increase update. Or give some chapter in exchange of power stone .

Kuroto
KurotoLv5Kuroto

Thanks for the chapter! Why don't you make small timeskips, so to show his interaction with the cast while still children? After all, only Cana appeared 'till now! It would be great to see him interacting with Erza, Mirajane and cia.

Mirio_kun
Mirio_kunLv1Mirio_kun

Make a time skip for S rank promotion. And next some small skip for Gray, Matsu, Erza, Mira.

Starcat777
Starcat777Lv4Starcat777

You can make small time skips but not much because that can ruin the story progress as for the fairy island accidant where everbody stuck for 7 years if mc’s lovers ( mira, erza and others) gonna stuck their mc should stuck too in that island but you can make them defeat or escape the island because there is now mc and others are stronger than in the canon.

Deus_Dakota
Deus_DakotaLv15Deus_Dakota

Im fine with small time skips in general and for the 7 year time skip i think he shoulsnt be apart of it because he isnt really needed to be there in whatever way i think about it. so maybe he could become the guild master and recruit future strong mages like rogue, sting, yukino, kagura and more

frostqilin
frostqilinLv6frostqilin

only small time skip

MARIO1801
MARIO1801Lv10MARIO1801

Que sean pequeños saltos temporales. según el orden van. 1- Cana, 2- Gray, 3- Erza, 4- Natsu,-5 Mirajane

Obsideon
ObsideonLv4Obsideon

ruinreader
ruinreaderLv5ruinreader

thanks for the chapter 👍 need more

Infinite_Shadow_57
Infinite_Shadow_57Lv13Infinite_Shadow_57

Thanks for the chapter

Cultivation_God
Cultivation_GodLv10Cultivation_God

do the time skip

Gidion91
Gidion91Lv14Gidion91

small time skips.

Haochen
HaochenLv13Haochen

nice chapter

Lyrical_Ivo
Lyrical_IvoLv14Lyrical_Ivo

Make him stuck for 7 years

LazyAdept
LazyAdeptLv7LazyAdept

Thanks for the chapter

Starcat777
Starcat777Lv4Starcat777

Thanks for the chapter

JuSt_A
JuSt_ALv4JuSt_A

Thanks for the chapter

MrMike
MrMikeLv5MrMike

Small timeskips please! Thanks for the great chapter! Keep up the good work, can't wait for more!

95_novel_maniac_95
95_novel_maniac_95Lv595_novel_maniac_95

after all cast+ur(if possible) joins.....I think you should create a few chapters to cultivate their relationship (between mc and the girls) even if not to the point of romantic but still considering each other important (more than others).....use in between event like healing erza's eye, saving lisana ,a few combined mission with mc and the girls helping the girls increase their strength (specially Cana.... since she use card magic you can take reference from you gi oh.... like the more rules she set the powerful she can use ex- setting up field or being in particular environment....or a specific card can only be used at specific time of day... like cruel sun when used only at peak high sun the more powerful it is...or enchantment cards.. like talisman).....you can even connect the dark mages that tortured him to tower of heaven this a good reason to for connection with erza.... going for time skips without proper foundation for the future relationship would decrease romance effect in the herem....as for tenrojima 7 year skip....I think instead of sealing him with others.. ... have him some how escape and work on his statue and husie relationship (if you are going to include her)....ex having him going on rampage killing dark guilds as grimore heart was one of the reasons..... increase his strength to kill acnolgia and husie helping him and healing his broken heart ...you can also connect the statue with the curse the God gave to zerif and Mavis ....and lot more.... HOPE IT HELPS EVEN A LITTLE THANKS FOR THE CHAPTER 👍👍👍

Khors
KhorsLv15Khors

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