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Comments of chapter undefined of Fake Goddess to the True Goddess

Fake Goddess to the True Goddess

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Overlord_Dovahkiin
Overlord_DovahkiinLv14Overlord_Dovahkiin

couple of mistakes I noticed. I'm the title it should be Didn't not Doesn't. "Cultivation was this easy? How come I didn't know?" secondly where Su li says "Err, Sister Lan is cultivation was this easy?" you want to either remove the is or the was. 'is' is present tense and 'was' is past tense. generally speaking you want to keep the same tense through out a sentence.

2yr
Overlord_Dovahkiin
Overlord_DovahkiinLv14Overlord_Dovahkiin

for the record you have four options to pick from "... is cultivation this easy?" "... cultivation is this easy?" "... was cultivation this easy?" "... cultivation was this easy?" all of them mean something slightly different but, considering the title you probably want to go with the last one.

2yr
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