Comments of chapter undefined of Shades of the New World

thanks for the chapta

Will it be possible for Evin to cast lightning once he's proficient enough in Storm Magic?

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Thanks for the chapter

bruh poor instructor. It's the awkward moment when your told to stop 0joking the bull but keep poking

Great fight, but to put my thoughts about the issues I found. The moment our MC started fighting with the birds, it took him 2 minutes to suffocate them, that is a problem in few regards which I think you should rework in one way or another. Suffocating during high adrenalin moment is done in seconds, you body needs high amount of oxigen to operate because of muscle spending. 2 seconds is more likely to be the needed time to kill someone like that or at least make them lose consciousness. But if you take the road and keep the timing to 2 minutes, that’s quite a long time during a fight. Pro boxing matches are 3 minutes a round and a lot of action is happening for that time for comparison, the nature of a fight is to take very few moments especially if it’s about life and death. It may look longer for the participants, but it usually take just few seconds.

a good one , Thank you

Oh my accidents happen :)

well shit. .