Comments of chapter undefined of Shades of the New World
Shades of the New World
NakedApron
Chapter comments6
something I'll never understand about stories that drag on in the childhood phase is that if your going to have your characters act like adults why not just skip the child phase why not just write a few chapters about his child hood and start the real story when they are like 16 why waste so much time on them as fucking children
hold up are you telling me that if I read to the end see of what been posted so far he's still a kid that's 257 chapters godamn
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amazing world building here really enjoyed the chapter and I'm impressed that this is your first novel , I know I've said this before but you're underated your book and writing had so much potential and I know the joy of an author is the response from his audience , I'm enjoying this so far but I'm afraid to catch up đ
