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Holly S. Roberts

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SatanicPandaLv10SatanicPanda

I cried . the way the author had the beginning of this chapter I thought they were gonna break up ny poor heart wouldnt be able to take it . so glad they didn't……wish their was a little more about what other challenges they have to go through and if they get to have little ones . it was a very good story I loved it

3yr

Leah_NunnLv10Leah_Nunn

I liked it but why not make separate books in general if you made their own books You could go more into detail about their endings instead of just basically cutting it off You could do a time skip or something to anwser final questions or write in the future babies You ended with it would be cute if it ends with them teaching their daughter how to play the game

3yr

Dianne_Davis_0423Lv11Dianne_Davis_0423

Oh my I love this story cause it reminds me of the movie of the female football player which is a true story, Beautiful ♥️❤️💕💗

3yr

DaoistgPj8SZLv11DaoistgPj8SZ

I cried. . want sure I could love a couple more than the first book. Jordan and Aidan are perfect. would be nice if the book went farther into their stories.

2yr