Comments of chapter undefined of Completion

Am scared for her and Kill

loving this book

love the story , good pace, exciting and riveting. my only problem is that I think you are too good for this platform. You are an apple in a bag of rocks. your far above all the other books I have looked at , your wording, spelling and grammar is better than all others. I feel that your book is like a tv show while the others are like children's programming...imho

why do I need to purchase the friggin book if I'm happy to pay per chapter! FFS! NOT HAPPY JAN!

womder if his will turn up now his second son is in hospital

Ooh I hope he is ok. seing your strong powerful man in pain is always a shock. But seing them in an ambulance that will hit you hard

well well

OMG I want to know what happened!!

Oh nooooo!!!!

great

Scary what will come next?

This is intense. Hope all is well

Scary

cant wait to finish

I read this ending so quickly the suspense was definitely there.

oh no Killen you better be fine

Can't wait to see what happens next.