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Back in Time: Through time and Space, Love Persist

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WebnovelCreator101
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I like it. It's good for a first story. You might want to fix your tenses a bit, but the flow of the story is impressive. Your hard work has payed out, so don't worry, I can see it clearly throughout the first chapter. And the way you leave out details is no problem at all, it's just the way authors do it ^^

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really well work was done

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👍

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Nice chapter! Being detailed was the thing in making a novel. It was important but mind the pacing too. The readers might not like of things going in too long. But still write more! it was awesome!

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