Comments of chapter undefined of Obsidian's Moon

Obsidian's Moon

AtlasWorld

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Bloo_02Lv4Bloo_02

A very well written book, love the characters energy and personalities. Definitely deserves a whole lot more votes... However all the given chapters do need another read through for spelling, grammar, tense and pronoun checks... But I really love the story development so far ... 😍🤩❤😘 Hats off to the wonderful writer 😘❤🔥🤤🌟

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Stephanie_LamonsLv15Stephanie_Lamons

my heart hurts, please, I've got to know what's going on with Lara, it's she ok, I mean, huge cliff here. please tell me something 🙏

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Domy2459Lv13Domy2459

I love the story!!! Thanks soo much 🥰

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emillerdcLv15emillerdc

Can’t wait to find out more!

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Shiny_Star5683Lv12Shiny_Star5683

What is this sudden twist?

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ReaderPrimeLv4ReaderPrime

Nice introduction . Hold me in your arms and discover me. Take a deep breath and breathe me in. We are soon to become one. ❤️💋👍

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