Comments of chapter undefined of Blacksmith of the Apocalypse
Blacksmith of the Apocalypse
Arkusar
Chapter comments7
And once again the MC gets tangled up in conspiracies to artificially increase the tension but fails to do so since everytime he's just pulled luck out of his rear to run away from an enemy he can't fight directly while unintentionally screwing up the enemies plan because of some impulsive action he performs. We haven't even finished establishing the many different issues that magically all involve Urth, because of course the home of humanity always has to be at the center of everything, why are we already expanding into galactic level political issues when we still haven't seen his home planet being reclaimed yet? Pick one a stick to it!
Yep. Everything and everyone is and was evolving even and especially when Seth was absent on Urth. And thanks for the chapter đđ».
Arkusar:If you think about it, the style of sequential writing is weird and unlogical. Why would all events in the world happen one after the other and wait to unfold until the MC is done with them? Seth decided to take part in one of the grandest competitions of the empire. What enemy would not try to mess with that? The things happening to Seth are things that happen everywhere, all the time. They don't happen especially to him because he's the protagonist, and other things don't wait until he is done with his stuff. At least I'm trying to write like that because I find it more interesting. Lastly, Urth is not a stage to "finish". We have been on the "multigalactic level" ever since Seth traveled to another world to learn, the difference is that Urth stays the main stage
