Comments of chapter undefined of A Guide to Kingdom Building ( Me Reincarnated 365 x)

The progress is too slow. The writing quality is excellent, but I just wish that things would progress a bit faster. It feels like I'm going through those dragon ball like anime again, a whole season describing just one fight. It was interesting at first, but now I just want to know what would happen consequently.

author since you have a kingdom building tag and the title is for kingdom building, I suggest you should read release the witch, bringing a farm into another world, or the realist hero who wants to build his kingdom. that will give you an idea how to create a kingdom building novel

author you shouldn't do too much world building at once becouse it can confuse the reader and you shouldn't forget the main character. by the way good novel

The elf walking non-chalantly... i love this part!

thanks for reading!

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks....I was thinking about prancing but that's just overkill..

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon