Comments of chapter undefined of The Apartment I Rented Is Also A Gateway To Another World!
CliffkunLolRektLv6CliffkunLolRekt
I dont like the fact she has a husband i thought You were gonna have her be his daughter then it would be ok plese Do a minor rewrite and make her the demon lords daughter
PotatoCatKunAuthorPotatoCatKun
Thank you very much for the insight. I changed her to be the Demon Lord's step-daughter so this could be an actual harem, but didn't make her his actual daughter as that is too basic in my opinion and I want to spice things up and not make her too powerful as this isn't a fantasy, but slice of life novel.