TheShadowLord
You could give more explanations about the world as far as the psychology of martial artists is concerned, I feel that there is a lack of more logical reasons than simple "effort" and "calm" to make a woman of that caliber fall in love. Added to that it is greater, in any case there is little depth; I hope it gets better. By the way I say this for the fact that this story does not separate itself too much from any other cliché Chinese novel apart from the "***" label yet I look forward to the improvement of your narrative, this one has potential.